Jacob, You did a nice job of starting the pitch with explaining the problem and possible reasons for it occurring. After that you provided your solution and the ways in which it will solve the problem and possible reasons for it. It is a great idea and you did a good job of pitching it for an investor or company to take an interest in you. Great job so far for your elevator pitch!
Jacob,
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job of starting the pitch with explaining the problem and possible reasons for it occurring. After that you provided your solution and the ways in which it will solve the problem and possible reasons for it. It is a great idea and you did a good job of pitching it for an investor or company to take an interest in you. Great job so far for your elevator pitch!